Score: 10

"superb"

submission: How 2 Succeed on NG pt.2

date: June 28, 2008

Just as the first one, which could lead us to a another almost hypocritical point... Well done.

Score: 7

"Hopefully helpful"

submission: Hare and the Tortoise.

date: June 22, 2008

Hallo,
That was a nice little flash with a nice animation style. My one quim concerns the movement (which one reviewer has already mentionen). It seemed a bit repetitive or - for a complete lack of a better word - "loopish". For example the tortoise's cheering in the trophy seemed to be the same movement looped over and over again.
I hope that you get a good mark for this and the best of luck.

Score: 8

"A good addition"

submission: Primal War 17

date: May 10, 2008

A really good addition to the series, although i cannot help but partially agree with stirfriedsushi's comments. It has gotten a bit out of hand, not with the dialogue (a personal opinion), but with the magic and telekenesis etc. Animation was, as always, great and the effects were probably the best they have ever been. Stirfriedsushi's points should be thought about though, despite it being a "useless" review.

Score: 2

"welll..."

submission: Godzillas Depression

date: January 26, 2008

This was not really that good. Nice effort though, but the movement can barely be called movement and the graphical side of this was really bad. But not a bad effort for your 2nd try, some bits were smooth, such as the blood and arms extending.
Another tip is do not forget the backgrounds, good ones can really boost the quality of the flash. Cannot really say much else creatively, as you probably know it yourself. Keep going though, and do not let yourself get put down by bastards who say it's shit. It's not. Good luck with future works!

Score: 10

"Unbelievable"

submission: -Falling-

date: January 20, 2008

This was truly brilliant. You must have put a lot of energy into this and it has clearly paid off! THe music was perfect, hauntingly calm yet subtely forlorn. The movement of the wire figures was phenomenal and the camera work and editing... the camera work and editing. You are talented, that was the best part about this piece, especially the curcular zooming out showing the man alone and small in the room.
10/10 - Amazing.

Score: 3

"Well..."

submission: Music Video Collection

date: December 7, 2007

Not wanting to be too harsh, but there was very little that was noteworthy in this. Making such clips is all in order, but then nothing really happened in them. Minimal or repetitive movement (such as a person walking or falling) with nothing else to maintain attention (such as backgrounds moving, changes in angles etc). I know it is a bit much for a flash, but just having 1 small element similar to these would have made it better. Do keep going though.

Score: 0

"yea I got that too"

submission: Heart Breaker

date: June 7, 2007

It just went from the menu to a pink screen.

Score: 7

"Like it"

submission: Cursors of tommorow

date: June 7, 2007

I'm the "savior"? Anyway, very good cursors. It would be good if you could make them desktopable.

Score: 8

"Blimey!"

submission: Godless - Hope Dies Last

date: June 6, 2007

This was a really, really, long flash - you must have worked a long time on it, well done. There were some nice artistic touches to this, such as the cut from one person to another as/via the nails and the dove in the man's glasses. The animation was alright...but then this was really long (my screensaver came on twice lol) so it would have been hard to make it meticulous.
The music was well added as well, although the sound effects were rather clumsily done. Coming back to the music, some of it may be unsuited to the flash just because of its associations - i.e. the X-Files tune (although this may only be me) seemed a bit out of place here - only because it made me think of the X-Files.
The only issues I have with this is the lack of speech and the lack of subtitles. This would have been so much better had there been voice actors and although I know German, as does the previous reviewer, many will probably not, so subtitles would really have helped with the score. If you need translations in your future works, then i will gladly do it/them.
Other than that, gut gemacht

Score: 4

"What to say, what to say..."

submission: Turbo Diesel

date: May 27, 2007

Sorry about this, but this was a rather dire flash. Why? It was really an assortment or repeated images (like that fat man and the dancing girl, the statue doing the same movements).
Crudely including real photos/pictures into a flash cartoon can really damage the overall appearance of the flash - perhaps you should avoid doing that in the future.
I'll ignore the song, as to say whether its good or bad would be a question of taste. Hope this helps,